READERS COMMENTS

 

"Excellent! You are amazing, your nice words and your descriptions may affect many of your readers in pleasant ways! There are many lines that I have liked in many of the poems. I noticed that some are a bit complex with different layers, very brilliant when understood. I liked that some talked about the youth. I find this to be very interesting and reflective- good for your target demography the young people".

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"I do have to mention the poem "F**K you I said". That one was great! It has a dark humor. (Like the person in the poem is sitting in the bath and she says that she's in hell! Just where the man in the poem told her to go. I just loved that line. It's so very clever!)

I really appreciate this rendition of how it can be in a relationship with its ups and downs. It's very good. Almost like the beginning of a short story I would say - absolutley wonderful!"

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"An aspect of the collection that I really enjoy is your repeated use of the diamond-metaphor. I think that in at least 3 poems you use this symbol and I really find it beautiful and also the bearer of possible mulitple meanings. I like that.

Because this diamond-imagery is used in several different poems it also ties the whole collection together. Like a red thread binding together the entire work - brilliantly and beautifully."

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"Many of your lines are just beautiful and actually inspiring, Abbyan. Like the lines about children and how they "shine". I really love that.

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Sometimes it can be good to shock and almost scream out a message. Other times it can be effective to relate a strong message in beautiful language. The latter is what you do here and I find it effective and moving".

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